before: The ball came towards Richie. He jumped into the air. He held out his hands. He was excited. It was up to him.
after: Spinning the hard oval came soaring towards Richie. Jumping through the air he stretched out his arms and captured the squashed circle. eager he dashed to the goal. It was up to him.
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