Tell: Jeff was shocked
Show: Jeff's mouth dropped as his eyes widened his eyebrows went up. he was just shocked
Tell: Bob was exited
Show: Bob jumped around his mouth opened wide eyes closed shut.
Tell: john felt sad
Show: john flopped on the floor tears going down his cheeks he started to squeal.
Tell: Gary was hungry
Show: Gary's tummy rumbled his mouth hung open.
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